Thread: a little poem about friendship

here it is :

DIL KI baat chupana aadat nhi meri.
kisi ka dil dukhana aadat nahi meri.
aap sochte hain hum bool gaye apko.
par itne pyaare insaan ko bhulanaa aadat nahin meri


it's kinda my own work

DIL KI baat chupana aadat nhi meri.
kisi ka dil dukhana aadat nahi meri.
aap sochte hain hum bool gaye apko.
husn ko bhool jana aadat nahin meri

How abt this? good try keep it up u have the khayal just need wazan.